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04/10/2006 7:25 PM Alert 

Read if you dare...

Okay, so it's not a very good poem, but here's the story - today, I was sitting on the bus to go home and realized I didn't have my headphones with me and so couldn't listen to any music. So I look through all the books and journals in my backpack and decide I'll be creative for once. I'm going to write a poem. No clue what to write about, haven't been inspired in many months. Then I start pondering the meaning of the word "star" and quickly realize for the first time why celebrities are called stars: they are distant, untouchable, and bright.

I'll call this poem (for now) "Star."

Star of stars
Suspended in the sky
Your brightness flickers
In another's eyes
But when the morn comes
I see you and see you
               still higher
               and wait
For the night to come
And show you a while
                 Untouchable
For the day
Or the clouds come
To give me a break
Alone I must think

The curtain parts
From a thousand distant lights
From a million million miles
Yet you are
My star of stars


Critique? I might add some more...
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04/10/2006 7:34 PM Alert 
I liked the poem a lot!!!! really, i do think that here's a great forum, i like the people of this forum are amazing and i know that katherine and you are very good people!
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04/10/2006 8:35 PM Alert 
I like how the word "star" is like a double entendre. It has a concrete meaning and a more metaphysical meaning. =) I especially like the lines "Your brightness flickers in another's eyes" because really all that makes a star is their fans and genuine admiration and appreciation from other people. =)
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