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Username: Kat_time
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07/31/2006 3:40 PM Alert 
I had to put my name down. My other two posts didn't have my name at the bottom of the poems.
Here is my edited version of "Cherished Moments"


"Cherished Moments"

The stage is filled with spotlights
Millions of people are watching
Very excited, very nervous
Her name is announced

She stands at the Center of the Stage
Feeling proud
Ready to Sing to Me
Like an Angel ready to Spread its Wings

Her Soothing Voice Touches my Heart
Fills me with Peace
Brings me Happiness
And soars like a Shining Star across the Galaxy

I clap, feeling Grateful
With such wonder
How this Incredible Singer came to be
Her beautiful smile very touching
A Moment forever Cherished!

By:Aaron (Kat_time)
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07/31/2006 3:43 PM Alert 
I also have a second poem for Katharine! Enjoy.

"Happy"

You make me feel so happy
Your voice
Is like a Diamond with a Million Sparkles
Reflecting upon me

A beautiful White Light
Shines upon you
So Heavenly and Peaceful
Chasing the Dark Clouds Away

You have a Heart of Gold
A Kindness to your Soul
The Caring of others
That Melts my Heart Away

You make me feel so happy
In more ways then one
But one way to sum it up
Is that you will always be Number One

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07/31/2006 4:55 PM Alert 

Dear Gary,

After giving it some thought, I would like it if my poem is not included in this project (Phantom Emotion). I haven't been able to work on it, and it's not where it should be. I would have really liked to be included in this, but I don't feel my material is up to par (I wrote two other ones). Thanks for your advice though!

Jasmine


P.S. I LOVE those Steve.

"I think it was the summertime when I laid eyes on you. I didn't even know your name...The boy you never wanted just steals your heart..."--Kat McPhee, Love Story

"4 walls and no you. The silence in this room is so loud...wow"--Kat McPhee, I Lost You

"I didn't see the crash that burnt the bridge, didn't see the missile that sank my loveship down..."--Kat McPhee, Dangerous

"Wanting you to be wanting me, no that ain't no way to be...You never were a friend of mine..."--Kat McPhee, Over It

"No more lonely nights to hurt me, no more tears left to spare, no more reasons to be unhappy. You threw them all up in the air..."--Kat McPhee, Each Other

"Your pedicure, white-tipped French. Your legs don't make no sense...Shoes like these make me hate flats..."--Kat McPhee, Open Toes
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07/31/2006 8:28 PM Alert 
    Shining Star


Sometimes people would look up to you
And want to reach out
But they just can't, coz you're up there
And they're far beyond from where you stand.

Some would try to go where you are
Just to catch a glimpse of you
And just by the wave of your hand
Is enough to make them smile.

Some would save money
To buy the magazines with your photo & story
It’s like seeing you real close
And it makes them happy.

Some would write to you
Though not very sure
If the letter reaches your hands
Or still waiting outside your door.

It’s like you’re the star in the night
Shining so bright
It’s nice to look up and make a wish
Though, it is out of reach.

So they tend to go on wishing
That one day you’ll take time
To reach to them
Even just for a while.

So take time if you will
You’ll see how it’ll make them feel.
Show them that you care
That our Shining Star is for real.




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07/31/2006 9:41 PM Alert 
Posted By NothlitHawk777 on 07/31/2006 4:55 PM

Dear Gary,

After giving it some thought, I would like it if my poem is not included in this project (Phantom Emotion). I haven't been able to work on it, and it's not where it should be. I would have really liked to be included in this, but I don't feel my material is up to par (I wrote two other ones). Thanks for your advice though!

Jasmine


P.S. I LOVE those Steve.

Oh no, Jasmine. I'm not letting you off the poetic hook that easily! I really want to include your poem. It is original, it is VERY good, and it is needed to balance other types of poems.

Could you e-mail me at worksite@msn.com to discuss, or post your e-mail for me to write to you?

Thanks much,

Gary

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