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07/16/2006 10:07 PM	Alert
Here is my last poem. I'm still not sure about the title. I couldn't make anything else fit. Let me know what you think. Hope you enjoy!! Thank you by Christina (plhgirl2277) For making the right choice And blessing us with your voice Thank you For giving us a piece of your heart And sharing with us from the start Thank you For all that you give And the life that you live Thank you For all of the strides that you took And confirming how an idol should look For inspiring us to think in a positive way And to strive for a better life everyday Thank you For the love that you share And your never-ending care Thank you

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07/16/2006 10:48 PM	Alert
Christina, you go girl!! I am really impressed with what you have submitted. You are able to do different styles of poetry. I wish writing poems would come a little easier for me. I am working on two presently and hoping and praying for a successful outcome. All of you talented poets help give me the incentive to continue to write and not give up. Thank you Kat fans!!!

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07/16/2006 11:04 PM	Alert
^^Thank you again Trina!! That is really sweet of you. You as well as all of our other fellow McPhans definitely provided inspiration, so thank you for that I can't wait to read your poems!! Just keep going, I'm sure they will be beautiful. You'll be in my prayers Thank you again!

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07/16/2006 11:19 PM	Alert
Christina, You will find my first poem titled "KATHARINE" a little before you posted your inspired poetry. I hope you like it!

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07/16/2006 11:38 PM	Alert
Posted By Trina on 07/14/2006 4:43 PM "KATHARINE" Kindles a fire within the hearts and minds of all who hear her voice. A passionate and caring devotion to people and animals. Treasured and adored by family, friends, and fans. Heavenly voice that embraces a melody of love. Amazing ability to touch the earth's most fortunate souls. Radiant beauty on the surface and within. Inspired to make the world a better place. Natural, flowing grace which covers a determined inner strength. Effervescent nature that brightens the human spirit. By Trina Trina! I love it!! I really liked your idea of spelling out her name!! I especially love the last line. Beautiful poem Can't wait to see your next ones!! Christina

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07/16/2006 11:49 PM	Alert
Thank you Christina!! Your compliments make me feel good inside. Let us continue to be an inspiration for all involved in this awesome project!!

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07/17/2006 1:29 AM	Alert
Posted By KatKrazy on 07/16/2006 9:37 PM I hope this is somewhat helpful and not simply obtuse. I feel this poem of yours will be a unique, important, and very meaningful contribution to the collection. Gary Not obtuse at all, Gary--and I appreciate the constructive analysis. I've attempted to write poetry before--and usually don't get the educated opinions that you're doing...so thanks for your time doing this. I agree with you that this was probably a little more challenging than I should have attempted, but leave it to me to try something different. Perhaps I just fear giving out personal subconscious thoughts in poetry and prefer to make comment on a macrocosmic level instead. Speaking of obtuse, I hope you got that Latin quote "Sapere Aude!" That's a reference to famous philosopher Immanuel Kant and the term he referenced in his books about enlightenment ("Dare to Know!"). I used that as pointing to one moment of time in the past. But, to answer to the early civilization aspect at the beginning: I'm referring to very early cultures such as the Greeks (especially), Egyptians, Aztecs, etc., who all had a uniform opinion on what constituted high art. That's not to say that there probably wasn't some unrecorded dissent on some piece of art created (hence the "little subjectivity" line rather than "no subjectivity")--but there's historical evidence that these cultures went to see the same plays and did the same types of art then. Perhaps why there was more uniformity was because they had nothing to compare it to as cultures did later. Maybe that's a good reference point to consider in a re-edit on that poem. The "One Voices" in comparison from now to the past is basically showing a complete turnaround (or at least a more subtle one) in how we may be viewing art with Katharine around today. That's probably a fantasy aspect to the poem--but implies there may be more of a turnaround (or somewhat of a renaissance) ahead than we think. I agree that the impact of Katharine's own involvement is a little blurry there--so I'll have to tweak that somewhat. I'll take what you said and do a slight re-edit this coming week. Instead of reposting, though, I'll just re-edit what's already there and give a post indicating that. Thanks again, Gary. I want to give some time to making comment to your re-edited poem and the other good poems posted here. This is a great project that goes much deeper than we probably all imagined.

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07/17/2006 1:51 AM	Alert
Hi Greg, Two quick follow-ups to consider: 1. The balance between our knowing what we mean in our poetry (and I do mean our/we), and the average, decently-educated reader being able to see it. 2. Have you thought about making Katharine more of a symbol of what you would like to see happen with art as opposed to having her "bear the burden" of single-handedly revolutionizing music? Yes, help me see what needs work in any of the four poems I've posted, but especially The Contest which has most recently been revised. All the best, Gary

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07/17/2006 2:03 AM	Alert
Posted By KatKrazy on 07/17/2006 1:51 AM Hi Greg, Two quick follow-ups to consider: 1. The balance between our knowing what we mean in our poetry (and I do mean our/we), and the average, decently-educated reader being able to see it. 2. Have you thought about making Katharine more of a symbol of what you would like to see happen with art as opposed to having her "bear the burden" of single-handedly revolutionizing music? Yes, help me see what needs work in any of the four poems I've posted, but especially The Contest which has most recently been revised. All the best, Gary I'll take some time to analyze 'The Contest' here in the next couple of days. I just have to digest it a little more before giving extensive comment. Though, from one read-through, you give a wonderful comparison to what the contestants go through on 'AI' and what most of us will probably encounter in real life. But also, most acutely, what Katharine will probably still have to contend with to a degree in her show business life. Yes, that 'our/we' problem is something we all have to be careful with in deep thoughts. And putting my own opinion on where Kat should take art is a great idea. Although that puts a level of subjectivity into where she should take it--even after I note that subjectivity is a bit of an anathema to the art world. Nevertheless, there's probably a balance I can put in there that gives an opinion, yet make people conjure their own spin. Thanks again, Gary, for the comments...and will make comment on the other poems this coming week.

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07/17/2006 2:16 AM	Alert
Dear Christina, What can I say about your third poem, except...thank you ...just teasing. I would like to push you just a bit on this one. The core idea of expressing our gratitude to Kat is very important and you make that case strongly and clearly. I wonder, though, if you could reach more for some more uncommon rhymes and in doing so give us more detail about Kat. In some ways, most of the verses could be about many much-loved individuals. It's hard to be innovative on poem #3, I know, but what new things can we learn from you about Katharine? One of my favorite poetry-related quotes is from Stephen Schwartz, the song writer of Wicked and several other major Broadway hits. He said in an interview that the key to writing good song lyrics is to find rhymes that are both completely unpredictable but also feel inevitable. No easy task to be sure (and we are not Schwartz), but I think it's a goal to shoot for. Whatever you decide about this, you've made terrific contributions to the project. Gary

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07/17/2006 2:33 AM	Alert
Gary, Wow, this is certainly a challenge but I am up for it. The whole time I was writing this poem, something wasn't right about it. I think you have found what that is. This may take some time, but the product could be good. Thank you for your advice. Off to work! Christina

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07/17/2006 11:16 AM	Alert
This isn't supposed to scan perfectly. This is just how it came out. Now that I think of it, it's kind of like a song with verses and a repeated chorus. DIAMOND GIRL Something tells her to fly north to see what she can find. She knows her dreams, she knows her skills, she knows her own mind. Progress feels so slow, so slow, despite the whirlwind pace, And she feels like both the hare and the tortoise in the same race. But if you look closely you can see diamonds in her eyes, And if you look closer still you can see the future. It’s all right there, just written in code for initiates only. Doubters doubt, lovers drown them out, But only she knows the truth. The numbers dwindle, the pressure mounts, the dream tantalizingly close. She sings, she cries, refuses to give up, and dispels the old ghosts. She learns to give them what they want, makes the stage her own. She finds her look, she finds her voice, finds old fears have flown. But if you look closely you can see diamonds in her eyes, And if you look closer still you can see the future. It’s all right there, coming closer every day. Detractors scream, lovers beam, But only she knows the truth. On top of the world, or so it seems, the crooked path made straight-- A clean shoot like a laser beam, and on out through the gate, Where the fields all bloom with flowers, and well-wishers await-- And she’s almost wary that so much good might be tempting Fate. But if you look closely you can see diamonds in her eyes, And a yellow brick road stretching toward the future. It’s all right there, just past the poppy fields. Her feet will never leave the path. Many outstretched arms, many warning alarms, But she will always know the truth.

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07/17/2006 12:54 PM	Alert
Guys, I really really wanted to do something original, but it's too hard for me to write poetry even in my own language, so in English was simply impossible... =/ So I decided to be a part of this with a song that reminds me a lot about Kat. The Way You Look Tonight (Tony Bennett/Frank Sinatra) Someday, when I'm awfully low When the world is cold, I will feel a glow just thinking of you... And the way you look tonight. Yes you're lovely, with your smile so warm And your cheeks so soft, There is nothing for me but to love you, Just the way you look tonight. With each word your tenderness grows, Tearing my fear apart... And that laugh that wrinkles your nose, Touches my foolish heart. Lovely ... Never, ever change. Keep that breathless charm. Won't you please arrange it ? 'Cause I love you ... Just the way you look tonight.

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07/17/2006 2:01 PM	Alert
Hello Katharine Fans! I have a poem here for the lovely Katharine Mcphee! Have Fun Reading! "Cherished Moments" The stage is filled with spotlights Millions of people are watching Very excited, very nervous Her name is announced She stands at the center of the stage Feeling proud Ready to sing to us Like an angel ready to spread its wings Her soothing voice melts all hearts Fills us with peace Brings us happiness And soars like a shining star across the galaxy We clap, feeling greatful With such wonder How this incredible singer came to be Her beautiful smile very touching A moment forever cherished By: Aaron (Kat_time)

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07/17/2006 2:45 PM	Alert
Personally I've always wished I could hear her sing The Way You Look Tonight. I love that song. Maybe someday when she does an album of standards she'll consider it. And yes, it's certainly a song one can imagine being sung TO her as well.

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07/17/2006 9:14 PM

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I have completely re-wrote the 'Thank you' poem. Thank you again for the advice Gary. I really liked writing it this way. Let me know what you think. Hope you enjoy and happy writing!!

Thank you

by Christina (plhgirl2277)

For expressing yourself through song choice

And liberating our minds with your voice

Thank you

For all of the positive thoughts you have planted

And the window to your heart you have granted

Thank you