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Username: Yuvaram
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08/04/2007 11:58 AM Alert 

Hi everyone!

I just took part in my first interschool competition!!! And my school won!

I entered the Creative Writing Competition dubbed 'Cascade of Words'! I entered the school with not so much as a thought to what I would write that day.. I remember quite well when my teacher said she'd put me on the list as a participant.. then too, I didn't seem to really feel anxious.

Anyway, the day came, and I had no idea who my partner in crime was either .. I just knew she was this girl whose brother was famous in school.

When I finally figured out who she was, she told me that she had spoken with other students from the host school and they had told her that her English teacher liked two things... quotes and pretty pretty colours.

So the first thing on my agenda was to find pretty colours Not icky brown or yucky green.. pretty colours

I finally gave up when I realised that there was no such thing as a shop close to this school.. I ended up borrowing icky brown, pink and red from my partner in crime.

Anyway, they told us to go to the "Wanderers" room where our competition was to begin..

They wrote down the following three topics on the chalkboard:

1) Two Coffee Cups

2) ............ Life is like that

3) When I reached there, there was no "there".

I had one hour to write a story based on any one of the three topics..

Which topic would you have chosen? And what would you write? Come on, play along..


Don't forget, we're all human.. give what you want to receive... a smile, a thought, a tear, joy, pain, whatever it be.. you give it, you receive it.
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08/04/2007 12:01 PM Alert 

I chose no 3

When I reached there, there was no "there"

All was dark again.. as I was pedalling across the puddled road. It was raining again.. pouring in fact..I dashed across the road as fast as I could while the same thought ran through my head.. over and over again.... I must...

I woke up, half dazed.. and beat myself up over the fact that I could not understand why this dream kept recurring. However, that thought soon passed as I got ready to do the chores my masters had set out for me... after all, what was a lonely servant boy like me to do but to work? In less than ten minutes, I was dressed and ready to grind my fingers to the bone.

My day was as uneventful as every other.. I did my household chores, cleaned the dishes, washed the clothes.. cleaned up the mess that the little masters would make (Which proved more and more tedious each day!!).. rarely did I have time to rest. Even in the evenings, I had to work outside the house to make ends meet.

In the evening however, the mistress ordered me to go out to buy her some vegetables. I borrowed the family cycle and pedalled across town. I couldn't help but notice that it was raining again.. pouring in fact. Pretty soon, puddles of mud re-surfaced. It all looked so familiar.. I was right there.. I knew it! I was so close.. yet.. so far away... I beat myself up wondering.. Why?

That night, I had the same dream again.. it seemed that each time I had this dream.. it seemed clearer and clearer. Tonight however, it seemed like it would be my last dream.. it was so clear.. I saw it.. I saw what I had been looking for.. there, right next to the cemetary.. right across the road.. I saw what I had been looking for when I was pedalling across town. There lay a tiny hut.. a hut I used to call home... and I couldn't help but notice.. family.... I must.. Must reach..

I woke up half dazed.. half astonished as to what I had found out... I knew what it was that I had to do. I grabbed the cycle in the evening and pedalled towards the house I had been looking for.. I knew It would be there.. just as serene as I'd pictured it. However, when I reached the place.. I fell down and broke into tears.

I saw the charred remains of what was. Painfully, I rose and walked towards the charred ground.... it seemed that with each step I took, memories flooded into me. I remembered playing with my brother.. with my family watching and laughing alongside us... and I came to the saddest realisation of my life.. for



Saddened by what I had finally figured out, I raced back to the little room I called my house.... I poured gasoline all over my room.. and rushed towards my master's home.

"Dada, may I have a matchbox?"

"Why would you need such a thing?"

"I...I..must"

However, I grabbed a matchbox and rushed towards my 'room'....





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The firemen later doused the fire. The next day, they found these words engraved in red on the charred wall of his 'room'..

"When I reached there, there was no "there"

If I cannot reach there, I must go There"


No one could tell, but upon his charred face, was a crude smile.. he was finally home.


(Note: Since you're all American busybodies .. Master refers to the male dominator in the household and the little masters are the children of the household.. this is a rural Indian themed story and thus so, the person who's a servant is a small boy.. also.. Dada's a North Indian term.)

When I reached there, there was no "there"


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08/04/2007 5:56 PM Alert 
wow! thats really good Yuv! ur a great writer.
Ok I'll write one just for fun

I'll do numero dos


It was the first day of my 10th grade school year and I was more excited than ever. This was the first time I would actually be goin' to a real school, with real kids my age! I was homeschooled for a while when I was lil' so I don' know near nothin' 'bout real schools. My ma' and pap' are kinda... overprotective of us kids. But, who could blame 'em? They only want what's best for us, and that's exactly why I love 'em.
I woke up in a jiffy jus so I could put together the perfect outfit to show off on my first day. I quick grabbed my patched up, high rise jeans out of the laundry basket, and snatched my favorite kitten sweater from the very top shelf of my walk in closet. My gran'ma gave me that sweater as a birthday gift right before she passed away. It's one of my most cherished memories of her. I was on my way downstairs, and I felt like I was missing something; my suspenders!. I had forgotten how big these pant's were when I bought 'em about a week ago. . . I just had to buy em' ; My money was burnin' a whole in my pocket! When I got downstairs my ma' did dressed my long copper hair in two tight braids jus' like I like 'em, handed me a "quick bar" and I was ready to go.

I got out of the car fast as I could, anxious to start the day. I'd seen shows such as, "Lizzie McGuire" and " That's So Raven" on the Disney channel, so I thought I'd have at least some conception of what a normal High School was like; ...boy was I wrong.
I skipped into the school lobby with a huge grin on my face. I could not wait to be in a real classroom! With real friends! But when I glanced over at all the faces in surrounding me, I recieved what had to be just 'bout the meanest looks I'd even gotten in my life. And that got me thinking... "What did I do?"

It was five minutes til' the school bell rang and I was at my locker gettin' my books for Hist'ry class.
I was signed share a locker with a girl named Stevie. "What a great knew way to make a friend!", I thought. I quickly got her attention, reached my hand out, and introduced myself. It was then I noticed the look; the same look I had gotten from everyone else when I arrived here. She didn't say anything, and I knew that wasn't a good sign. I saw her look down at my sweater, and then at the rest of my outfit. " Nice .. cats.", she mumbled under her breath. I looked down at my sweater, and then realized I forgot to tie my shoes! My glasses then tumbled to the floor an I couldn' see anything. I was hoping Stevie would be of help, but instead, as I was on my way up, she slammed the locker door right in my face. This friend thing was going to be harder than I thought.

I walked into class and there were sounds of snickering coming from each and every one of the students. I tried to ignore it. " Allisen Guy?", the teacher asked. "Uhm.. here?" I replied. " Congratulations Ms. Guy, you recieved a 600 perfect score on your summer standards of education test. " I smiled a great smile. "NERD!", I heard from across the room. " THATS RIGHT, I CALLED YOU A NERD!" Nerd.. I thought of the meaning. "Like Steve Ercel on that one show?" The whole class started cracking up now. I laughed along. They thought I was funny!! " Hey MS. GUY ( one kid emphisized), NICE SUSPENDERS!!" It was then I realized, they weren't laughing with me. They were laughing AT ME. I started out of the room. Tears came to my eyes and my glasses fogged up. On my way out, a kid called Colin stuck his foot out into the pathway and tripped me. I fell flat on my face, and my glasses shattered to pieces.
I ended up getting though the rest of class. At lunch I ate my myself. No one even bothered to as much as say Hello to me. I was alone.
At the end of the school day, I went to see my hist'ry teacher cuz he had asked to speak with me after school. " He talked to me 'bout what happen'd that day. ... " People are like that.", he said. " High school can be hell. People can be rude, mean, and prejiduce for absolutely no reason at all." " All you can do at this point is just accept yourself, and be who you already are; and THATS how you'll succeed." " The popular kids are jerks, the smart kids are "geeks", and the kids that like art are considered "emotional" beacuse art deals with "feelings in your paintings..." ." "You're a good person, Allisen, and thats all you need to worry about." Nothing will probably ever make sense......Life is like that."







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08/05/2007 9:04 AM Alert 
Dang, yaull are smart!! The best thing I've ever wrote was The Little Girl Who Couldn't Shut Up. Yaull are so good!!!

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09/11/2007 5:53 AM Alert 
Wow, been a while since I've been here..

I loved your story!

And Sam who was that little girl?

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09/13/2007 6:24 PM Alert 
Haha I wrote it in 7th grade about one of my friends lmao Ok, so here’s how it goes.

There once was a little girl who could not shut up. She talked so much that everyone who listened to her died within 24 hours. Eventually she traveled the whole world and killed everyone but herself, and since she still couldn’t stop talking long enough to fix herself a banana for lunch, she too eventually died and there was nobody left on Earth. The end :]

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